# C12 Native — Voice-over script (Raylight cut) **Locked to the Raylight timeline.** 18 shots · 1:45.000 · 30 fps · 16:9 Every beat is 6.000 s and works the same way: - **+0.0 → +3.5 s** — phone tilted right, headline + caption on the left - **+3.5 → +6.0 s** — text exits, camera punches in on the key part of the screen So each beat takes **two short lines**: line **A** lands with the headline, line **B** lands with the push-in. Leave the last ~0.6 s of every beat silent so the hard cut breathes. Target pace: **140 wpm**. Do not rush. If a line feels tight, cut a word — do not speed up. --- | # | In | Out | On screen | Line A (say at +0.6) | Line B (say at +3.7) | |---|----|-----|-----------|----------------------|----------------------| | 1 | 0:00.0 | 0:06.0 | A wall of labels | This is the C12 dashboard today. | Label, colon, value. Nothing is sized. | | 2 | 0:06.0 | 0:12.0 | Forum day, live | Forum day could live on the Lock Screen. | Time left. Who's here. What you owe. | | 3 | 0:12.0 | 0:18.0 | It follows you | And it follows the member into every other app. | Long-press, and the day is there. | | 4 | 0:18.0 | 0:24.0 | Handled in advance | Forum day, handled a week in advance. | A Wallet pass surfaces itself on the morning. | | 5 | 0:24.0 | 0:30.0 | The 30-second glance | Most days a member needs thirty seconds, not a session. | No launch. No login. No load. | | 6 | 0:30.0 | 0:36.0 | Sized by what matters | Same data as the first screen, sized by what matters. | The next meeting gets the room. | | 7 | 0:36.0 | 0:42.0 | Catch me up | Twelve replies about a peer's payroll, summarised by the iPhone itself. | Nothing leaves the phone. | | 8 | 0:42.0 | 0:48.0 | One tap, no app | Peer replies arrive as people, not as an app. | "I'm praying" is one tap. | | 9 | 0:48.0 | 0:54.0 | Captured, not typed | CORE section ten wants five Economic Value Add figures. | Point at the statements. Filed encrypted. | | 10 | 0:54.0 | 1:00.0 | Say the commitment | The most valuable minute in C12 follows a presentation. | Nobody types then. So they talk. | | 11 | 1:00.0 | 1:06.0 | Commitments that travel | Commitments mirror into the member's own reminders. | With triggers that actually fire. | | 12 | 1:06.0 | 1:12.0 | Pick up where you stopped | C12 already reads the curriculum aloud. | What it can't do is remember where you stopped. | | 13 | 1:12.0 | 1:18.0 | Eleven minutes out | Eleven minutes from the office is real reading time. | Section two, on the car screen. | | 14 | 1:18.0 | 1:24.0 | Once a year | The CORE Business Presentation happens once a year. | Twelve encrypted sections, filled in over months. | | 15 | 1:24.0 | 1:30.0 | Lock the numbers | Lock the numbers, not the whole app. | Discussions stay open. The dashboard covers itself. | | 16 | 1:30.0 | 1:36.0 | The member you have | Built for the member you actually have. | Type scales all the way up. | | 17 | 1:36.0 | 1:42.0 | Where this lands | Thirteen concepts. The same Rails app, doing a great deal more. | Nothing here rebuilds C12 natively. | | 18 | 1:42.0 | 1:45.0 | RoleModel Software | *(+0.8)* Let's build it. | — | --- ## Flat read (no table) ``` [0:00.6] This is the C12 dashboard today. [0:03.7] Label, colon, value. Nothing is sized. [0:06.6] Forum day could live on the Lock Screen. [0:09.7] Time left. Who's here. What you owe. [0:12.6] And it follows the member into every other app. [0:15.7] Long-press, and the day is there. [0:18.6] Forum day, handled a week in advance. [0:21.7] A Wallet pass surfaces itself on the morning. [0:24.6] Most days a member needs thirty seconds, not a session. [0:27.7] No launch. No login. No load. [0:30.6] Same data as the first screen, sized by what matters. [0:33.7] The next meeting gets the room. [0:36.6] Twelve replies about a peer's payroll, summarised by the iPhone itself. [0:39.7] Nothing leaves the phone. [0:42.6] Peer replies arrive as people, not as an app. [0:45.7] "I'm praying" is one tap. [0:48.6] CORE section ten wants five Economic Value Add figures. [0:51.7] Point at the statements. Filed encrypted. [0:54.6] The most valuable minute in C12 follows a presentation. [0:57.7] Nobody types then. So they talk. [1:00.6] Commitments mirror into the member's own reminders. [1:03.7] With triggers that actually fire. [1:06.6] C12 already reads the curriculum aloud. [1:09.7] What it can't do is remember where you stopped. [1:12.6] Eleven minutes from the office is real reading time. [1:15.7] Section two, on the car screen. [1:18.6] The CORE Business Presentation happens once a year. [1:21.7] Twelve encrypted sections, filled in over months. [1:24.6] Lock the numbers, not the whole app. [1:27.7] Discussions stay open. The dashboard covers itself. [1:30.6] Built for the member you actually have. [1:33.7] Type scales all the way up. [1:36.6] Thirteen concepts. The same Rails app, doing a great deal more. [1:39.7] Nothing here rebuilds C12 natively. [1:42.8] Let's build it. ``` --- ## Watch-outs (from the data sweep) Say these lines as written. They are worded to stay inside what C12's schema can actually supply. - **Beat 3** — say "the day is there", not "the agenda". C12 has no session-by-session agenda model. - **Beat 12** — the line credits C12 for already having "read it to me". The new part is the resume point. Keep both halves. - **Beat 14** — CORE is annual. Never call it a live session. - **Beat 17** — "Nothing here rebuilds C12 natively" is the closer that protects the pitch. Do not drop it. ## Recording notes - Record dry, one beat per take, 48 kHz mono. - Slate each take with the beat number. - Music is already in the project and sits low. If your read runs long, stretch a beat to 7 s in Raylight rather than speeding up.